Their seems to be quite a few of you from the same school. Was this a school project? I wonder what the details of the project were, only because they aren't really in the style of Natsumi Hayashi.
OK, some tips for next time, be more aware of your background and choose one without distracting features in it. Try to keep things level. Try to use a faster shutter speed to remove any motion blur, and finally use the rule of thirds when possible.
Good luck! |