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02/01/2010 01:02:16 PM · #1 |
Hey guys, me and my husband have been working on a project: our own comic!
It's called Techno ( LINK ) and we'll add a new page every monday.
We're very curious what you guys think about it! Thanks :D |
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02/01/2010 01:07:27 PM · #2 |
| Looks good sofar. My initial impression is that this is going to be more along the lines a graphic novel than light entertainment, and may be making some political statements along the way. |
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02/01/2010 01:08:57 PM · #3 |
Thank you!
You might be right. But I hope that's not a bad thing? ;-) |
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02/01/2010 01:15:16 PM · #4 |
Originally posted by hanneke:
Hey guys, me and my husband have been working on a project: our own comic!
It's called Techno ( LINK ) and we'll add a new page every monday.
We're very curious what you guys think about it! Thanks :D |
The artwork is beautiful. You might need to get someone to check the grammar and sentence structure, as it's awkward to read in places (i.e. could flow a bit better) |
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02/01/2010 01:45:36 PM · #5 |
Originally posted by JH:
Originally posted by hanneke:
Hey guys, me and my husband have been working on a project: our own comic!
It's called Techno ( LINK ) and we'll add a new page every monday.
We're very curious what you guys think about it! Thanks :D |
The artwork is beautiful. You might need to get someone to check the grammar and sentence structure, as it's awkward to read in places (i.e. could flow a bit better) |
Thank you so much for your comment! The artwork is in the hands of my husband so I'll tell him about your compliment. The text (and layout) is in my hands, I'll try and find someone to check it for me! |
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02/01/2010 01:51:48 PM · #6 |
Agree with the readability comment. Also, wide screen is fine with my monitor, however, those with narrow or small monitors might find the horizontal format unconventional (as to the more traditional vertical scrolling). Just a thought. Artwork is a little soft, but then again, that may be what you are going for. . .dreamscape type presentation.
Hope this makes sense.
Oh yea. . . and BOL.
Message edited by author 2010-02-01 13:52:34. |
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