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06/12/2009 01:18:35 PM · #1			 | 
		
		 
 
 Photography is my new hobby. Here is my first portrait. Please check and let me know valuable comments. 
 
 Aiyoramaa
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06/12/2009 01:20:19 PM · #2			 | 
		
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06/14/2009 04:04:29 AM · #3			 | 
		
		You have made a lot of progress in the last 6 months. Excellent!
 
 I think the landscapes need a bit of work, but still pretty decent. You definitely have a good eye and some good creativity.
 
 Your 'my first portrait' is a bit low on contrast and it does seem a tad odd with the grey to yellow.
 
 I've done a grey/yellow partial desat recently, so I'm not ruling it out as a possibility, but there are some areas in the pic that look a bit odd and the use of grey doesn't quite fit in a couple spots.
 
 keep it up!
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06/25/2009 02:18:21 AM · #4			 | 
		
		Thanks for ur comments and critics. 
 
 Will try my best in next shot :)
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