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 06/05/2009 02:41:00 PM · #1
Hi DPC gang... I need your help. I just finished this website for my office last week (I did everything but the illustrations), and I'm looking for opinions. The idea was to create a central resource that demonstrates the importance of package design and related services to business owners and brand managers. At this point, it uses general-interest features and articles to at least communicate the idea that design can be an important tool to lead companies out of tough times and/or increase sales and market share. I'll have to build upon this early base, but I'm looking for feedback as it stands. Typos, suggestions, general layout... whatcha' think? Once I'm comfortable with the site, we'll send it out as a feature or press release to our clients (many of whom are sitting on their wallets at the moment).
 06/05/2009 02:50:54 PM · #2
Looks pretty slick. I like it! I did find a couple of weirdnesses. First, there is a stray arm & hammer logo floating around top left on the rubber brands page. Second, the about page and the resources page are the same page (about.html). If it's supposed to be that way, I don't like having 2 differently labeled menu links to the same place.

Looks like a typo in this sentence as well: "An unparalleled run of breakthrough design and engineering solutions, including the iMac, iPod, iPhone, OS X, Airport, iLife software, and a highly visible retail stores have since catapulted Apple into a company with over $29 billion in cash... and a market cap five times the size of Dell Computer!"

Message edited by author 2009-06-05 14:53:21.
 06/05/2009 03:22:09 PM · #3
nice and clean. make sure you double check all those external links...a couple of them were really slow to load. the basic idea is clever. i'm just wondering, though, if the text is too dense to keep your reader's attention? maybe put full-blown articles elsewhere, but distill the main text to strong points that get your message across without over-burdening the visitor?
 06/05/2009 04:45:29 PM · #4
Originally posted by freakin_hilarious:
there is a stray arm & hammer logo floating around top left on the rubber brands page.

LOL- so there is! I had to stretch the window really wide to see it.

Originally posted by freakin_hilarious:
Second, the about page and the resources page are the same page (about.html). If it's supposed to be that way, I don't like having 2 differently labeled menu links to the same place.

They'll be separated soon. For now it was a matter of convenience since another page would've required too much approval time to figure out visuals or layout for Resources.

Originally posted by freakin_hilarious:
and a highly visible retail stores

Yep. That's a Typographicus Erroneous. Nasty creatures.

Thanks for the input!
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