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05/02/2004 12:28:33 AM · #1
could anybody give me some suggestions? How do you like them? How could I make them better? are they any good at all?







thank you. I can't wait to hear what you have to say.
05/02/2004 02:12:51 AM · #2


nice perspective, and framing.. the artifact on the left top corner is bothersome and it needs some exposure adjustment,, more brighter perhaps..but than coming at it from a different perspective.. the clock being brighter than the rest of the scene creates an interesting look.. i guess it is all subjective.. one more thing: there is a greenish color cast on the walls of the building which i dont know how i feel about..



this one is remarkable i think.. there is a plant like this nearby where i live and i am gonna take a picture of it one of these days... i like the overexposure in some areas.. very nicely done



at first i didnt like this much.. because it seems out of focus.. but than looking at it more it turned out to be an interesting image.. but still seems out of focus to me...



i think this one is just alright.. and the thing that makes it alright is the parallel lines i think.. there is no center of focus in my opinion and it doesnt appeal to me very much...



this is a great shot.. the level of detail and clarity.. and DOF all seems to work perfectly.. you can almost see a character in the monkey's face.. and the reflection in its eyes are really cool.. i think it is a great effort and avery nice photograph.. b&w works nicely too...

keep posting as you shoot more.. i will try to make more comments whenever i can...

Message edited by author 2004-05-02 02:14:21.
05/02/2004 03:42:56 AM · #3
I agree with theodor38 on ALL but one point. The tree photo doesn't need any center of focus. The effect it gives me is the parallel lines like theodor38 said but i like that its off center. It does something eery to the photo that I like.

but theodor38 is right, its all subjective.
05/02/2004 11:29:47 AM · #4
thank you for the help, I really appreciate it.
05/02/2004 11:36:03 AM · #5


You did a good job getting the exposure right, these guys can be tough. Nice details in the face and hair. The eyes are a little dark, but good catchlight/reflection. At first I didnt like the light area on the right hand side as it was competing too much with the darker chimp, but after looking at it for a while it doesnt seem to bother me as much now.

BTW chimps are not monkies, they are apes!
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