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10/14/2008 05:39:35 PM · #1 |
Graphic design is not my strong point, but I had to throw together an advertisement for a book that's going to be passed out to all the attendants at a college pageant I'm shooting in a week or so.
Let me know what you think!

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10/14/2008 05:47:55 PM · #2 |
I'd center the woman in the middle frame and make her eyes horizontally level. Otherwise looks good. Easy to read, to the point. |
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10/15/2008 10:58:53 AM · #3 |
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10/15/2008 11:05:50 AM · #4 |
I'm not sure if you'd want to include a family shot in there or not, is the primary audience going to be brides? Also, I'm trying to imagine what it would look/feel like without the black separators, maybe white. I'm just trying to think of things, but it's hard because it's pretty nice already. Fantastic, elegant design.
Message edited by author 2008-10-15 11:10:06. |
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10/15/2008 05:42:05 PM · #5 |
Thank you! I'll definitely see about fitting a family shot, cover all my bases...just trying to make it as clean as possible w/out being too cluttered up.
Thanks!
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10/15/2008 05:50:58 PM · #6 |
Yes, I was also wondering about "college pageant." Is this a beauty pageant? I was thinking you might want to include a shot from as similar a venue as possible.
As for your original question (I think), the general layout looks fine to my eye, but I'm not a graphics person. |
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