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04/14/2004 11:06:07 PM · #1 |
Would anyone mind giving me an honest critique on these shots-I was having some fun w/ a late nite photo session.(Images have lost some quality due to linking from site).
Message edited by author 2004-04-15 00:02:04. |
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04/14/2004 11:13:19 PM · #2 |
Geocities does't allow linking of pictures. The links currently don't work. Copy the links to the thread and click on the Automatically parse URLs: and the links will be clickable.
//images.ofoto.com/photos574/1/94/66/25/16/1/116256694103_0_ALB.jpg
//images.ofoto.com/photos574/1/94/66/95/41/3/341956694103_0_ALB.jpg
in case the links are broken.
Message edited by author 2004-04-15 00:59:34. |
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04/15/2004 01:08:13 AM · #3 |
As in most portrait shots the eyes make the picture interesting. Both shots have good attention to the eyes, especially the highlights.
The desaturation of all but the mask brings attention to the eyes. Not sure if I like the sheen in the mask though. You may want to play around with keeping the color of the eyes and keep the mask desatuarated also to see what kind of feeling it gives.
2nd shot. Contrast is very nice.The monotones are very good here. Taking off the mask and peeking makes this very interesting. Good formula of light {hands), dark (shadow), light (face),dark (hair, light (background0 helps to make this pleasing to the eye.
If I were to choose a favorite it would definitely be the 2nd one.
Edit: Looked through your past challenges and notice that your b&w shots have very good contrast. These are the ones that I enjoy. Looks like I've given you an average of "7" on your b&w shots.
Message edited by author 2004-04-15 01:13:08. |
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04/15/2004 10:08:00 AM · #4 |
Wow-thank you for a helpful(!) critique- I would definitely agree with the eyes being saturated vs. the mask. I will try it!
-grace
Message edited by author 2004-04-15 10:08:20. |
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04/15/2004 11:41:43 AM · #5 |
| I'm getting a "Forbidden" message when trying to see the photos from faidoi's link. |
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