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07/28/2008 12:35:19 AM · #1
and hence scored better? :)

all constructive criticism is appreciated! Help me become a better photographer!

Evan

PS thank you in advanced!
07/28/2008 12:47:21 AM · #2
I like the idea for the photo, but the sugar container gets a bit lost in the background.
Maybe try and put a bit more light on the top, or really polish the container's lid.
07/28/2008 02:59:53 AM · #3
It seems like the lighting is off or something here. This is a really good idea but I think that it might benefit from some softer lighting. The background and the sugar are too contrasty, I think... I didn't vote in this challenge, but I probably would have given this a 5. I also think this photo is a little oversharpened.

Message edited by author 2008-07-28 03:00:30.
07/28/2008 12:36:25 PM · #4
Hey thanks for all the great comments so far. I appreciate that honest feedback, it's what will improve my photography! If anyone else has anymore critiques, critiscisms, or praise send them my way! It's very much appreciated! Hope everyone is having a great monday!

Evan
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