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Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 17-55mm f/2.8G IF-ED

07/17/2008 03:33:36 PM · #1

Any comments or Critique would be greatly appreciated. Trying to improve the skills & need all the help I can get. I know it's just a lowly Sparrow but I have to start somewhere.thanks

Message edited by author 2008-07-17 16:02:47.

smichener

Nikon D300

07/17/2008 03:49:37 PM · #2

Frankie- Thanks for your nice comment on one of my shots last week in a challenge.

I couldn't see your picture larger than the thum you have posted. Can you repost it, so we can see a larger version?

Katmystiry

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

Canon EF 85mm f/1.8 USM

07/17/2008 03:50:29 PM · #3

clickable thumb :)

Message edited by author 2008-07-17 15:50:43.

smichener

Nikon D300

Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 17-55mm f/2.8G IF-ED

07/17/2008 03:57:30 PM · #4

Your settings look good but you might try bumping the ISO to 200 because it's a little dark, or a longer shutter. I like the composition, placing the sparrow on the left looking right. Could he have been placed lower. Due to the colors being dark, he would need to be brought out from the background in post processing.

07/17/2008 04:03:51 PM · #5

I have know idea how to get the link in there (clickable).:(

07/17/2008 04:06:50 PM · #6

Thanks for the help Smichener.

Originally posted by smichener:

Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II

07/17/2008 04:08:51 PM · #7

Originally posted by Katmystiry:

clickable thumb :)

Thanks for the help Kat, I have no clue how I even got the thumb up :).

Patsfan

Nikon D70s

07/17/2008 04:19:03 PM · #8

My version of it.

Message edited by author 2008-07-17 23:35:07.