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12/18/2007 07:43:38 PM · #26 |
Left some comments.
One thing I didn't say in the comments ... you've managed to tone down the orange cast quite a bit. The skin tone still aren't "excellent" but they are a LOT better than they were and are certainly acceptable in these images. I believe you mentioned you weren't using flashes (though I don't think you ever said what you were using instead). But a white balanced source of light (such as a flash or strobe) would help out a lot.
You're improving quite rapidly, which only proves that listening to criticism, even if it's not what you want to hear, can greatly speed up the learning process. DPC is very good for that.
Keep up the good work!
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12/18/2007 09:17:51 PM · #27 |
Yeah, what David said :) the color is looking a lot nicer.
As a whole those are looking really nice now, grats. 2 more small things.
1) some of the shots could use a bit of sharpening.
2) in the solo of Danielle you've got some weird ghost leg/butt action going on, not sure what caused it but its a bit distracting.
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12/18/2007 10:27:24 PM · #28 |
I just have to say...wow!! You have improved these images so much! You should be very proud of yourself...excellent job! |
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12/18/2007 10:55:00 PM · #29 |
Thanks everyone for your lovely comments and critique, I do take criticism very well, and I use it to learn from it. And yes I am very proud of myself. I can see myself improving a lot, and I owe it all to DPC. Thanks everyone, you are all great! |
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