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01/22/2004 03:43:06 PM · #1
Hello guys! I am posting some new photos in my portfolio. I would appreciate it very much if you can post some comments for improvements. I take them all using Nikon Coolpix 4500 set at either portrait or macro mode. (Don't know how to manipulate the ISO, etc. so i do it the easy way).

All of these were taken these past two months. You can also gain some cultural info as I especially like to take pictures of people. Again, PLEASE COMMENT. I don't mind harsh comment too...for as long a they are "constructive".




01/22/2004 03:55:41 PM · #2
I left comments on a few of your shots. These are all excellent candids. You have a way with getting great expressions and compositions.

Compositionally and expression-wise my 2 favorites were the little boys with watermelon and the female tourist.

The greasy guy is pretty darn good as well.

My least favorite would be the last picture, the 2 boys behind the orange 'curtain'.

I enjoyed looking at these very much - thank you for sharing.
01/22/2004 04:00:01 PM · #3
tfaust: I'm not sure why people refer to any non-studio or non-posed shots as 'candid' .. these are true portraits in my eyes and your work in beautiful. You've captured each person's spirit...really...they're very good. [lighting can be inconsistent in some shots, but that's my only critique].

I was looking at your camera, I always thought that they looked awkward, how do you find it comfortable-wise?

Message edited by author 2004-01-22 16:00:56.
01/23/2004 05:38:42 AM · #4
Thanks to all those who gave comments to the pictures in my portfolio. tfaust and goldberry, thanks a lot for taking timeout to critique my work. I will continue to show what's going on in this part of the world to you all.
01/23/2004 08:36:49 AM · #5
Originally posted by GoldBerry:

tfaust: I'm not sure why people refer to any non-studio or non-posed shots as 'candid' .. these are true portraits in my eyes and your work in beautiful. You've captured each person's spirit...really...they're very good. [lighting can be inconsistent in some shots, but that's my only critique].

I was looking at your camera, I always thought that they looked awkward, how do you find it comfortable-wise?


Please tell me what makes these not candids? These people are not posed as in a studio portrait shot. Either way - why does one person's opinion of candid vs. another matter enough to point it out? My thought of these being candid in no way lessens how great they are.

Message edited by author 2004-01-23 08:52:25.
01/23/2004 09:04:26 AM · #6
The Grease Man is very good, captures the isolation in the eyes...also the beauty (and she is) and of course the young man and his puppies. I still like your young monk very much - a favorite.
01/23/2004 10:36:45 AM · #7
I did two things wrong, I put Tfaust in the 'to' part but I meant to put Lobrodo. I apologize.
Also my tone came across wrong, I realize now that it seems like I was picking on you, but I really wasn't: I wasn't going out of my way to be offensive to you. Feel free to PM at any time you have questions or concerns with anything I've written on a picture or in a forum.

Message edited by author 2004-01-23 10:49:14.
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