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05/12/2007 08:09:40 AM · #1 |
Hello,
Please provide your feedback rgearding this shut.
Vienna25 |
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05/12/2007 08:17:40 AM · #2 |
| I really like it! Very dramatic. My only suggestions would be to PP the green signs (maybe darken them?) so they're not as prominent. Was this from a vacation? |
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05/12/2007 08:20:10 AM · #3 |
I feel that you have the basis of a really very nice photograph, but feel that with some editing it could be taken up a league.
I would suggest:
- a miniscule straightening adjustment - if you look at the bottom step, you can see it is not absolutely level
- some dodging and burning on the steps - I feel that they are a strong feature, providing a good sense of depth to the photo and this would be accenuated with a little subtle d&b
- some burning of the background through the central arch so that the white statue really stands out
- cloning out of the double highlight just to the left of the arch
- cloning out of the two smaller signs (I don't think that there would be much you could do with the larger ones)
- Sharpening.
The composition is good, and despite a tricky exposure situation, you have captured plenty of detail without blowing the highlights.
Edited to add thumbnail
Message edited by author 2007-05-12 08:22:52. |
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05/13/2007 05:01:21 AM · #4 |
Thank you very much for the feedback.
I's realy helping me.
I will try to apply the proposed suggestions and repost it again.
This picture was taken during a business trip to Vienna where I had some time to visit some of the famous places.
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