Shoot! Would love comments! - DPChallenge Forums

02/17/2007 10:20:56 AM · #1

Finally I can show my shots from the shoot!!

We had an assignment for school, and arranged the location, models, clothing, make-up.. It was fantastic!

While there, we wanted to use strobes, but they didn't work together. So we had to decide to use reflection screens with the available sunlight.

Comments are very much appreciated!

Message edited by author 2007-02-18 13:25:28.

fallingretina

Nikon D70

02/17/2007 10:39:18 AM · #2

They look great. I really like the first one

Sigma 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 DC OS for Nikon

02/17/2007 10:51:56 AM · #3

thanks!

Melethia, thank you too. I'll browse your portfolio to add some comments there :D

Greetmir

Nikon D60

02/17/2007 11:02:25 AM · #4

Very edgey looking technique ... it works well. I love them all but for the third one which makes the female arm look like it is in the process of sprouting werewolf hair. I find it REALLY detracts from her femininity.

... not to mention ... her eye makeup looks like it was applied with a bricklayer's trowel but that surely is beyond your control.

Other than that one point they are great and you should be proud IMO.

Oh ... and I REALLY like the angle of attack and treatment on GAZE!

Message edited by author 2007-02-17 11:06:29.

02/17/2007 11:10:04 AM · #5

thank you Greetmir!

I cropped "Passion".. better like this?

(my teacher agreed with you by the way ;) Frgot to edit. crop isn't perfect, but hard to choose)

Sigma 18-200mm f/3.5-6.3 DC OS for Nikon

02/17/2007 11:13:29 AM · #6

Originally posted by Greetmir:

Very edgey looking technique ... it works well. I love them all but for the third one which makes the female arm look like it is in the process of sprouting werewolf hair. I find it REALLY detracts from her femininity.

... not to mention ... her eye makeup looks like it was applied with a bricklayer's trowel but that surely is beyond your control.

Nooo! The eye-makeup looked very good! My editing (Urban Acid) made it very contrasty, that was my choice. I like it :P

Other than that one point they are great and you should be proud IMO.

Oh ... and I REALLY like the angle of attack and treatment on GAZE!

Thank you!

Greetmir

Nikon D60

02/17/2007 11:39:21 AM · #7

Originally posted by biteme:

thank you Greetmir!

I cropped "Passion".. better like this?

(my teacher agreed with you by the way ;) Frgot to edit. crop isn't perfect, but hard to choose)

... much better IMO.

02/17/2007 12:15:58 PM · #8

thanks

and also thanks to the commenters. will post comments back tonight!

02/17/2007 02:16:28 PM · #9

fotomann_forever

02/17/2007 02:31:26 PM · #10

Posted some comments for ya super-chick(en) :-)

02/17/2007 03:08:21 PM · #11

thanks Leroy :D

busy commentng for you guys now, might take a while tonight (I'm lazy), but it's gonna happen ;D

this might be a nice feature on the site, in your collection. this will do for now.

Message edited by author 2007-02-17 15:35:46.

Canon EF-S 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6 IS STM

02/17/2007 05:35:05 PM · #12

last bump ;)

SteveJ

Canon EOS-7D

02/17/2007 05:49:14 PM · #13

Originally posted by biteme:

last bump ;)

Okay, let me be frank...nope, I'll be me.

As long as I can remember, yesterday or the day before? I like grainy, dark photos, takes me back to the days of film. The story line is good:)

They really kick as far as I am concerned, more power to your elbow!