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11/15/2006 05:42:06 PM · #1 |
| can I get comments for the pictures here |
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11/16/2006 07:57:57 AM · #2 |
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11/16/2006 08:00:49 AM · #3 |
Might be better to add the photos to your portfolio - I am on my lunchbreak, and have found I can't access the link you provided from my workplace.
(edited: typsos)
Message edited by author 2006-11-16 08:01:24. |
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11/16/2006 08:07:25 AM · #4 |
| site timed out whilst trying to load.. |
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11/16/2006 08:09:02 AM · #5 |
I agree with Sara, you should upgrade your membership and post those pictures here. I'm sure you would get some advices for improvement.
You know, it should work like trade. People gather somewhere, display their goods there, one gives something and the other requites it. ;)
edit: your gallery of five images (which makes two in fact) opened for me, don't know why not for the others
Message edited by author 2006-11-16 08:17:05. |
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11/16/2006 08:53:20 AM · #6 |
Message edited by author 2006-11-16 08:58:02. |
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11/16/2006 09:09:19 AM · #7 |
Link worked for me... There are 5 images and my opinions (l-r top to bottom)
1.) Nice composition, uninteresting subject. The horse itself is a good subject but falls rather flat for several reasons. The lighting itself is rather flat, the sky uninteresting and the fence is distracting. You may be able to "punch it up" a bit with some creative editing. You could clone out the fence and maybe try to drop in a different/more interesting sky. That coupled with some level adjustments would certainly help this image A LOT.
2.) Similar to the above critique with a few exceptions. I like this one better, the pose is certainly much more interesting and the sky is a little more dramatic because your exposure is better on this one. It feels like it's cropped a little too tight at the bottom which could be corrected with some creative cloning. The fence again is a distraction that can be easily gotten rid of. Horizon is tilted, but overall a much better capture than the first.
3.) My favorite of all. This image has the most potential, but seems slightly overexposed (you've lost your sky again).
4.) Better exposure, but you may want to check your shutter speed. A faster shutter would've "frozen" the water splash giving you a much more dramatic image.
5.) I like this one a lot also but in this particular shot, a slower shutter speed would give the water a foggy/mistier appearance giving you a "dreamier" styled image. You're on the right track, but as it stands, the water simply just looks blurry.
Sorry if this sounds a bit harsh (not meant to be). I think you have a great start on some great images... they just need a little "tweaking".
My $0.02 USD. |
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