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08/22/2006 04:45:44 AM · #1 |
//www.harryphotos.com/window.jpg
//www.harryphotos.com/window2.jpg
Shot in the garage...comments?
Message edited by Manic - limit images to 500px/30kb or post links/thumbs. |
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08/22/2006 07:53:43 AM · #2 |
Nice work overall.
I think the lighting boarders on too dark, but you have made it work. I'm not sure the pose the model is in is very flattering for her. I would be interested to see more work with this model in varying poses. The garage wall you used makes this feel very organic and spontaneous. Maybe that's why I'm not a fan of the pose. It feels casual, but the pose destroys any illusion of spontaneity.
Post Production: I'm not a fan of the boarders, but that's my own hang up.
Message edited by author 2006-08-22 07:55:28.
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08/22/2006 08:21:32 AM · #3 |
I like the moody lighting, the colours and the plywood background.
I agree that the pose seems a little forced. If you're determined to use the window frame (it is an interesting element) you might try putting the model behind it.
I would lose the window frame completely and explore the possibilities of just posing the model. |
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08/22/2006 08:31:40 AM · #4 |
| I like the setting and the lighting. The frame is kind of interesting....if I were you i would try different poses with it. Being a female myself, I never want a picture where my body is directly facing the camera. In the first pose she is straight ahead. See how this position makes her appear wider? She has a great figure, but this pose is not flattering to her. In the next pose, her body is turned just a little and that looks much better, but her arms look funny. Almost a painful pose. She looks very uncomfortable. I think that the clothes are cute, but I would x the shoes. Either go barefoot or get a higher heal that shows more of the foot. |
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