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01/11/2006 07:49:05 PM · #1 |
Today I took some photos for someone for their business cards. Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
Thanks in advance.
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01/11/2006 08:05:46 PM · #2 |
Pink sweater: Good solid portrait, but a couple of things catch my attention. First, you may want to reduce the dark circles under her eyes in photoshop. Second, the outside edge or her left shoulder (right of frame) is well lit but the left/top of her head is slightly shadowed. The inconsistency between the two manages to get my attention, although I don't know that there is anything technically wrong.
Yellow sweater: I think her face is lit better her and the dark circles under her eyes less obvious. The top left of her head is still a little dark, but once again I'm not sure if it's really a problem. I personally don't like hair light, but it seems like the fill caught her should and face but didn't extend upwards.
The second shot is warmer, assuming the the background and light remained consistent between the two. Once again there is nothing wrong with warming up the image, but I thought I would point it out.
Nice work and thanks for sharing so we have the opportunity to discuss some of the details. It's quite likely other will have a different perspective.
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