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Tamron SP AF 28-75mm f/2.8 XR Di for Canon

01/02/2006 01:22:28 PM · #1

I've been working very hard for my study today. This one is an assignment to show the structures of three different objects.

What do you think? What can I improve or change?

Comments are very appreciated!

edit: sorry, it's triptych.. :S

Message edited by author 2006-01-02 13:23:10.

LeeD

Canon EOS-30D

01/02/2006 01:26:26 PM · #2

left you a comment

Canon EF 17-40mm f/4.0L USM

01/02/2006 04:26:12 PM · #3

thanx everyone for your comments.

got some new ideas while riding in my car (oh how I love those moments!). this week I think I'm gonna reshoot everything, and I'll post an update here.

Message edited by author 2006-01-02 16:26:54.

soup

Canon EOS-30D

01/02/2006 04:36:18 PM · #4

well the structures of two of the objects are clipped off at the edges. i would try to show the entire structure of all the objects i chose to photograph.

intersesting image - but not clean enough in my opinion.

Message edited by author 2006-01-02 16:36:35.

Canon EF-S 17-55mm f/2.8 IS USM

01/14/2006 10:18:43 AM · #5

this is my 2nd and last attempt for my assignment for my study. tried different things, but this one worked best for me. what do you think?

idnic

Canon EOS-60D

01/14/2006 10:21:45 AM · #6

Love this one, Hanneke! The pink really pops on the white and the composition is clean and well-suited for the triptych application. Very nice. :)

Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED

01/14/2006 10:25:48 AM · #7

thanx Cindi!

I've printed thes 3 photos sperately and gonna put it in a triptych passepartout for the assesement.. I hope I'm gonna get the score I need!

kearock

Nikon D90

01/14/2006 10:26:33 AM · #8

Overall i like the pink much better. I also like that you can see the whole rag. With it cut off before it was hard to tell if it was a rag or a smock or a shirt or just what. I do think the depth of field is a little shallow on the paint brush. It wouldn't be so bad on it's own, but put up with the other two it makes it look out of focus.

Message edited by author 2006-01-14 10:27:08.

Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED

01/14/2006 10:30:02 AM · #9

Originally posted by kearock:

I used the same aperture & the same point of view, so the DOF should look the same. I can understand what you're saying (these were my thoughts too..), but it's pretty hard to shoot a paintbrush without losing the small DOF. I tried this with a smaller aperture, but the results aren't better.
Thanx for your comment!

kearock

Nikon D90

01/14/2006 05:26:08 PM · #10

Originally posted by biteme:

Originally posted by kearock:
Overall i like the pink much better. I also like that you can see the whole rag. With it cut off before it was hard to tell if it was a rag or a smock or a shirt or just what. I do think the depth of field is a little shallow on the paint brush. It wouldn't be so bad on it's own, but put up with the other two it makes it look out of focus.

I used the same aperture & the same point of view, so the DOF should look the same. I can understand what you're saying (these were my thoughts too..), but it's pretty hard to shoot a paintbrush without losing the small DOF. I tried this with a smaller aperture, but the results aren't better.
Thanx for your comment!

Somehow it looks clearer to me in the black one. The bristles, the metal part and a bit of the handle all seem in focus, or in focus enough that you feel like they are, but in the pink one it seems to drop out of focus right after the bristles.