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12/31/2005 11:05:13 AM · #1 |
well i know this is a digital site but i would still like a few critiques if you wouldn't mind
this one was taken with a 1950's rollei |
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12/31/2005 11:50:43 AM · #2 |
The first picture is good...I'm not sure if you added the grain in PP but it works. I don't care for the composition that much...a tighter shot would have been better but keeping the actual window in the picture would still let the audience see that he is looking out a window...the siding is distracting.
The second photo needs fill flash desperately and the pose is funky. This was my least favorite.
The third one should have been taken from the other side, we can't see any facial expressions and the background is distracting. A tighter crop would work better for this picture, but there is nothing interesting in the scene as you can't see the people's faces.
The last one is my favorite. The lighting is great, the scene has depth and emotion. The composition is great, etc.
Keep up the work. |
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12/31/2005 11:58:32 AM · #3 |
now thats a critique thank you |
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