Baby Photo - DPChallenge Forums

12/08/2005 09:43:38 PM · #1

This was my free study entry. I didn't get many comments, but the ones I got were good. I would like to hear a little more of what is not good about this shot. It didn't get a terrible score, but obviously didn't have that "something" to bring it up out of the 5's.

Was it technical? Subject? Composition? Title? Combination?

On another level, if this was YOUR baby would you think it a good shot for framing etc? Trying to discern if part of the problem was no connection to the subject and not enough emotional impact or photographic impact to overcome that. I'd like to learn from this shot if can. Thanks.

EDITED TO ADD: By the way..this is not my baby, although I know the parents. I think he's a cutie, but I am not so attached that I will be offended by constructive criticism. :)

Message edited by author 2005-12-08 21:51:24.

pa_cuthbert

Panasonic DMC-FZ5

12/08/2005 09:54:56 PM · #2

I gave my feedback on the photo. It's very endearing.

Edit: I tried something on the shot. I'm a sucker for the Gaussian blur.

//i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/pa_cuthbert/baby.jpg
//i5.photobucket.com/albums/y158/pa_cuthbert/ed39d87b.jpg <--- I personally like this one.

I hope it helps.

Message edited by author 2005-12-08 22:14:53.

12/08/2005 10:14:25 PM · #3

Originally posted by pa_cuthbert:

I gave my feedback on the photo. It's very endearing.

Thank you for your comments :)

DjFenzl

12/08/2005 10:34:29 PM · #4

I posted comments, I hope they are helpful. :)

Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6

12/08/2005 10:49:36 PM · #5

Originally posted by megatherian:

I posted comments, I hope they are helpful. :)

Thanks Dan. They are very helpful and I appreciate you taking the time to explain your score. Thanks!

Kivet

Canon EOS-400D Rebel XTi

12/08/2005 10:54:21 PM · #6

I gave you an 8 because I am a sucker for beautiful babies. The composition was very lovely and I think if this had a softer warmer feel it would be a sure 10 from me.

Canon EF 85mm f/1.2L II USM

12/08/2005 11:03:45 PM · #7

Would this be an improvement?

Added slight diffuse glow and warmed the tone. Also cropped in a bit closer to reduce blanket a little.

Message edited by author 2005-12-08 23:04:14.

pa_cuthbert

Panasonic DMC-FZ5

12/08/2005 11:20:51 PM · #8

I'd say that's a lot better. It gives a bit more of that warm fuzzy feeling inside.

JulieG

Canon EOS-5D Mark II

12/09/2005 10:34:57 AM · #9

Hi I looked at your photo and can tell you my first impression. Firstly, I think it is a good photo and will mean a lot to the mother. You got in nice and close and the hand is great to show size. What I think could have made the picture better is this: The black background is a bit harsh. It contrasts too much IMHO with the softness of the baby. Some areas of blanket are blown out and they detract a little from the baby. I think just one simple single colored blanket wrapped tightly around the baby might have been better. I like the version by jpochard. It's funny cos you just know that the hand is the hand of the mother the way that she is holding the baby's hand. I think that is what I like best about the photo.