Could you... - DPChallenge Forums

12/02/2005 03:48:43 PM · #1

...comment on this one?

//georgetipter.myphotoalbum.com/view_photo.php?full=1&set_albumName=album02&id=portrait

Thx, George.

Canon EF 24-70mm f/2.8L USM

12/02/2005 04:06:42 PM · #2

Come on guys, put some elbow. ;)

dwterry

Canon EOS-1D Mark III

12/02/2005 04:44:02 PM · #3

Okay.... the good: Love those lips! :-) Beautiful skin texture.

The lighting is interesting. It makes for a good study in lighting. The girl is certainly pretty. But I just feel like I'm missing half of her face. So I'm undecided. Part of me wants to really like the picture and part of me yearns to see something in the shadows.

Tokina AF 12-24mm f/4.0 AT-X Pro DX

12/02/2005 04:59:33 PM · #4

Thanks Terry, anybody else?

Beagleboy

Canon EOS-30D

12/02/2005 05:00:38 PM · #5

Her lips aren't quite in focus. Neither is her eye. Her left eye needs to be brightened up some to attract the viewer's attention more. I also find that she's a little too high up in the image. Either crop some off the bottom, or give her some more room above. She is very pretty. I hope she will pose for you again.

Fujifilm XF 55-200mm f/3.5-4.8 R LM OIS

12/02/2005 05:03:43 PM · #6

Originally posted by Beagleboy:

She is very pretty. I hope she will pose for you again.

LOL, she's my GF so I hope she will.

P.S. I applyed neatimage to the photo to look more soft focused.

Message edited by author 2005-12-02 17:05:28.

ursula

Fujifilm X-T2

12/02/2005 05:25:48 PM · #7

She looks so sad, almost like she's going to cry any moment.

Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS

12/02/2005 05:42:30 PM · #8

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samanwar

Canon EOS-5D Mark III

12/02/2005 06:01:20 PM · #9

Focus is bothering me a lot in this photo, I am not sure if your camera did not have the right focus or if you accidently blurred the image during editing (maybe while trying to smooth her skin).

DjFenzl

12/02/2005 06:19:46 PM · #10

I agree, the image could be a bit sharper.

The lighting is interesting, however the dark area over her face isn't very pleasing.

Her lips are by far the best part but I'd prefer something a little more red to really make them pop. The orangish color they are right now is really the only strong color in the picture and I think it gives it a weird tone.

Overall I think it's a cool shot though. Definitely has potential.