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12/01/2005 07:04:58 PM · #1 |
I didn't get home in time to post this for the free study. I was so excited for it to be there too. I would love some feedback, mabey even what you would have voted on it. darn car...
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12/01/2005 08:52:02 PM · #2 |
My dog ate my homework. ;) Left you a comment.
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12/01/2005 10:19:20 PM · #3 |
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12/01/2005 10:53:25 PM · #4 |
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12/01/2005 10:59:02 PM · #5 |
it's the inner workings of a clock. shot at a 1 to 1 ratio. it's a little heavy on the left side of the frame. if that would have been at the bottom I think it may have worked about a little better
I'll see what I can do
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12/01/2005 11:13:16 PM · #6 |
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12/01/2005 11:16:10 PM · #7 |
The lighting is very flat and lifeless.I would of gave it a 3. Sorry to hear about your car.
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12/02/2005 12:14:15 AM · #8 |
Originally posted by Brent_Ward:
The lighting is very flat and lifeless.I would of gave it a 3. Sorry to hear about your car. |
the lighting is a 360 degree wrap around style, I'm not sure how it turned out flat. |
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12/02/2005 01:12:01 AM · #9 |
Originally posted by gi_joe05:
I didn't get home in time to post this for the free study. I was so excited for it to be there too. I would love some feedback, mabey even what you would have voted on it. darn car...
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I see the problem - a couple of those screws on the right are slightly stripped and their are metal shavings falling into the gears. Plus it looks like the rubber band came off and the hamster fell off the wheel. You just might need a whole new car. |
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12/02/2005 09:36:42 AM · #10 |
Well I hope you dont mind but I played with the photo a bit. Trying to get it not so flat. I think it definately stands out more. FWIW I would have given you a 5 or 6.
MattO
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12/02/2005 09:44:04 AM · #11 |
Excellent sharpness at 1:1. I agree with others here that its a bit flat. I also think the image would probably also look good in B&W.
BTW, you didn't get that magnifcation with your 18-35 did you? I've owned several examples of that lens, and its not really known for close-up work. |
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12/02/2005 10:08:09 AM · #12 |
Originally posted by hyperfocal:
Excellent sharpness at 1:1. I agree with others here that its a bit flat. I also think the image would probably also look good in B&W.
BTW, you didn't get that magnifcation with your 18-35 did you? I've owned several examples of that lens, and its not really known for close-up work. |
ohh no, it's shot with the nikion micro lens about 60mm away from the subject. I got the lens from checkout at school. |
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12/02/2005 11:38:00 AM · #13 |
Originally posted by MattO:
Well I hope you dont mind but I played with the photo a bit. Trying to get it not so flat. I think it definately stands out more. FWIW I would have given you a 5 or 6.
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What did you do to get that effect? |
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12/02/2005 01:19:05 PM · #14 |
Here's another try at it.
Lost a little in the shadows, but I don't think it was really adding much to the shot anyway.
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12/02/2005 01:52:35 PM · #15 |
Originally posted by gi_joe05:
Originally posted by MattO:
Well I hope you dont mind but I played with the photo a bit. Trying to get it not so flat. I think it definately stands out more. FWIW I would have given you a 5 or 6.
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What did you do to get that effect? |
I played with Saturation, hue, all done with basic editing rules. As I have yet to figure out how to do layers. When I got the colors I liked, I used USM and then ran it through Neat Image. I did all of this with Photoshop Elements 4.0
Edit to add that I think Tsheets did a much better job at making it look better then I did.
MattO
Message edited by author 2005-12-02 13:53:27.
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