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			|  | 06/30/2003 10:26:39 AM · #1 | 
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 This is the first portfolio I shot commercially. I would love to know what everybody thinks and what all I can try in the next shoots...
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			|  | 07/01/2003 10:40:18 AM · #2 | 
		| | no comments...no problems!! I guess a lot else is going on at present!
 
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			|  | 07/01/2003 10:58:03 AM · #3 | 
		| | Excellent work, clear and crisp,great composition and you obviously got what was necessary from the model. 
 Did you do much post processing,what were the technicalities of the shoot etc.
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			|  | 07/01/2003 11:22:37 AM · #4 | 
		| | Those are excellent shots!!!  There is one thing....I don't care for his month being open.  Looks odd...but that could be just me. 
 You did good!!!!
 
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			|  | 07/01/2003 01:04:46 PM · #5 | 
		| | They look very good. 
 Agree I don't like his mouth open - works well for some models but his expression doesn't look natural to me like that.
 
 I like the pose of the green tinged one best.
 
 To a small extent, for my tastes, I find the lighting a little harsh where it causes completely white areas on his skin - blowouts - for example in the last one from his back down along his upper arm - personally I'd rather the highlight there was less severe but that's probably a matter of taste.
 
 
 
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