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10/18/2005 12:40:25 PM · #1
Been sorting out old photos, and wanted some feedback on a few that i particularly liked

First, despite the sinister feel to this one, i liked the composition and juxtaposition of the gravestones looming over the family outing


This one I initially discarded as out of focus, but the more i look at it, the more i like it, but i'm not sure whether it works or not


And finally, I've done a few spiderweb/waterdroplet photos in the past, but this one seemed to work best


Any feedback? Critique me as hard as you want, please - i need to learn

Thanks,
Kirsty

edit: sorry about the weird sized thumbs, I really should pay that $25 for a portfolio, lol

Message edited by author 2005-10-18 12:41:41.
10/18/2005 12:57:45 PM · #2
Yep, you should get a portfolio, I was going to leave comments on your picture but I can̢۪t!!!!
Anyway, I̢۪ll leave you a comment here for the first picture:

I like the line of the wall leading into the picture and towards the family.
It almost looks as though the grave stones have eyes and are following the family.
The choice of color works well too.
Sinister indeed.

10/18/2005 01:05:38 PM · #3
Really nice work. I like the black and white macro the most. Tell me, did you use the F717 for all of these shots?
10/18/2005 01:23:52 PM · #4
Originally posted by WaysOfSeeing:

Tell me, did you use the F717 for all of these shots?


Actually, all these were taken on film with an Olympus OM10. They've been scanned, but no post-processing except levels, colours, dust removal...
To be honest, as much as i like the F717 (it's my dad's really, i persuaded him to buy it lol) I haven't really got comfortable with digital, i never seem to get the same results. Although part of that is psychological I'm sure, because you inevitably put more time and thought into film photos

Thanks for the feedback

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10/19/2005 04:50:01 AM · #5
bumpity bump bump bump

:)
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