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09/14/2005 08:19:20 AM · #1 |
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Message edited by author 2005-09-14 08:20:19. |
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09/14/2005 08:27:03 AM · #2 |
The b&w is superb!
Light - seems a little harsh, try diffusing more, that will definitely
help with the shadows.
composition - this works! nice!
when doing portraits, especially close-up like the first 4, the
eyes must be the focal point, seems like you lost that in the second pic
overall impression - Great job!
just my 2 cents!
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09/14/2005 08:34:20 AM · #3 |
Originally posted by superdave_909:
The b&w is superb!
Light - seems a little harsh, try diffusing more, that will definitely
help with the shadows.
composition - this works! nice!
when doing portraits, especially close-up like the first 4, the
eyes must be the focal point, seems like you lost that in the second pic
overall impression - Great job!
just my 2 cents! |
Thanks... Yeah... I am having a problem getting the hair light right and that is making the whole set up look a bit harsh.
I had a grid on the hairlight strobe but I am going to have to start using a lightbox I think.
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09/14/2005 08:35:40 AM · #4 |
Left some 2bit comments :)
Nice spontanious comfortable looking model.
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09/14/2005 08:42:23 AM · #5 |
the second shot got the glam blur treatment...
I dont think that I like it... it does make the image seem a bit oof
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