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08/03/2005 11:38:06 PM · #1 |
New addition to my friendship series I'm working on, you can see all of them in my portfolio
What do you think?
critique please!
Thanks in advance!
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08/03/2005 11:40:59 PM · #2 |
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08/03/2005 11:46:09 PM · #3 |
Thank you, The sun was really bright and them being wet didn't help, not sure how to fix that.
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08/03/2005 11:54:35 PM · #4 |
That is a real nice photo. I like the sepia tone although I wouldn't mind seeing it in full color as well. One thing that I noticed, though, is it looks like it could use a little bit of a rotate to the right a few degrees. Look at your lines at the top and the bottom and I think you'll see what I mean. I agree about the overexposure on the boy's head, but actually I think that it's appropriate being that it's no doubt a hot day, the sun is shining and the boy's are cooling off and having fun. I don't know if it would help or hinder, but maybe try lightening the shadows a little bit. Hope that helps. Now, I'll look at the rest of the series. :-)
Connie
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08/04/2005 12:22:43 AM · #5 |
Looks like you blatently cheated to me. Boys look stuffed and fake. Probably not even friends. ;-P
Sorry - can't get that crap out of my head.
Left a comment - great job.
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