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07/01/2005 05:35:22 PM · #1
I have much more to learn and few time to practice, so your comments would be very appreciated :


Thank you

Message edited by author 2005-07-01 17:35:39.
07/01/2005 05:35:56 PM · #2
AHAHAHHAHAHA AAHAHAHAHAHAH
07/01/2005 05:36:06 PM · #3
heh, just kidding, i think its great
07/01/2005 05:37:46 PM · #4
Originally posted by totaldis:

AHAHAHHAHAHA AAHAHAHAHAHAH

LOL
Thank you
07/01/2005 05:38:00 PM · #5
Originally posted by totaldis:

heh, just kidding, i think its great

Thank you again..

Message edited by author 2005-07-01 17:56:28.
07/06/2005 05:27:28 PM · #6
Well done for the first time.
One commentâ€Â¦ my eyes tend to drift mostly to the area under your chin because it looks more three dimensional then your face (more shadows). You may want to change your lights a bit so there is more volume to your face and maybe have the rest of your body emerge from the darkness. And perhaps try to orient your face so that it is not directly parallel to the camera lens.

07/06/2005 05:30:38 PM · #7
Your 'adam's apple' is distracting, a deeper shadow would in the neck area would help. Nice shot otherwise.
07/06/2005 05:48:06 PM · #8
I personally think it needs to be a little less stark in the contrast. The eyes are TOO white, IMHO, and while I realize they are the focal point, I think the drama is overdone.
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