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06/26/2005 10:03:26 PM · #1 |
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06/26/2005 10:05:38 PM · #2 |
| the 2nd one. simple. very effective. the first couple need to get a room. (HA!) |
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06/26/2005 10:05:58 PM · #3 |
2nd, the wide scene for sure
Message edited by author 2005-06-26 22:06:16. |
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06/26/2005 10:06:06 PM · #4 |
I really like the second one, it's a little more "anyone" and it has a nice dreamy wedding feel to it.
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06/26/2005 10:10:40 PM · #5 |
Definitely the second one. Simple and elegant.
My only suggestion might be to try white text instead of black in the second one; the black seems to blend in a little too much. It's legible but does not stand out well. White goes good for a wedding theme too. |
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06/26/2005 10:12:24 PM · #6 |
White may work too. I was actually doing the kissing couple and it needed the black text so lalala, I'm doing that, I inserted the second picture and the text stayed - I just didn't change it to match! lol
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06/26/2005 10:38:15 PM · #7 |
I gotta say- most of them are really busy. I like number 2, but it seems like overkill.
Might be worth looking at something simpler?
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06/26/2005 10:41:41 PM · #8 |
| Definately the 2nd one, I think the first is a little too intimate for a business card. Both of the pictures are beautiful though. |
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06/26/2005 10:48:36 PM · #9 |
| I'm with Clara. I don't really care for any of them for the same reason. But I also admit out of the three I like the second one also, but I'd go with a white font. |
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06/26/2005 11:08:02 PM · #10 |
The text of the studio name is hard to read. I also believe that you should have your name somewhere on the back of the card. Most people want to be able to talk on a more personal level.
The text on the 2nd front card option would be better served if it were horizontal on the bottom, its hard to read vertically as it is. It blends too well with the trees.
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06/26/2005 11:09:07 PM · #11 |
I fixed both images (his red nose in the kiss and the squash in the field picture.) Still the field? :)
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06/26/2005 11:10:14 PM · #12 |
Originally posted by jmlelii:
The text of the studio name is hard to read. I also believe that you should have your name somewhere on the back of the card. Most people want to be able to talk on a more personal level.
The text on the 2nd front card option would be better served if it were horizontal on the bottom, its hard to read vertically as it is. It blends too well with the trees. |
Thanks for the helpful crits however these are not final designs. I am trying to figure out which pic looks better but I didn't specify that in the original post. Before I do much work on either, I just wanted to know which pic...
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06/27/2005 03:32:19 AM · #13 |
M I like the second one.
The veil covers the face in the first one (where it is gathered up) in the most cricial part covering up the kiss. If the veil didn't gather then, I might say number one. |
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06/27/2005 04:19:41 AM · #14 |
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06/27/2005 04:24:45 AM · #15 |
| 2nd one, but add some text to it, like in the 3rd one, but really toned down. |
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