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06/23/2005 09:28:50 PM · #1 |
helloooOOo,
so i could use any advice or critique on this photo. i want to shoot more stuff like this in the near future so if anyone has ideas to make it better id appreciate it. also i need some help on getting rid of the spots on PS. also, why the heck am i getting spots! anything helps so please feel free.
(also as far as positioning, i could only shoot from below, or from the top a little to the left of the ramp)(and one kid was complaining that my flash was messing him up, but i dont think i could do without... he didnt do much better after i stopped shooting anyway.)
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Message edited by author 2005-06-23 21:33:27. |
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06/23/2005 09:51:15 PM · #2 |
My thoughts...
Rotation to align anything is out of the question too much detail would be lost.
There is a lot of un-needed space to the right of the sk8er in the white tee... Need a tighter crop...Like the poster on the wall so gotz to keep it... The airborne sk8er is not totally in the frame but we need to keep as much of him as possible... Thinking Thirds place sk8er in white tee in right third and airborne sk8er in top third...save as much poster as I can. Gives me an 8x10 crop...major elements are still in good locations.
USM to knock some to the soft edges down.
Increase Shadows and Mids to bring out a tad bit more detail of poster and two stationary guys. Decrease High to bring down some of the hot spots.
Added Soft Vignette to fade the corners and edges (kind of hide the fact that will don't have all of the guy on top)
This was just a real quick take might want to raise the mids a bit to bring out the by standers a little more but not so much that they become the main attraction.
Just my thoughts...
Message edited by author 2005-06-23 21:59:13.
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06/23/2005 09:58:29 PM · #3 |
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