Alright for a personal page, if thats what your going for stop reading here. As a real webpage and not joe's homepage cause i just learned about the interweb thingy i would agree with the previous commentor it is very chaotic and disorganized.
- Pick one background and stick with it, white is good for a proffesional site, similarly neutral colors, others can be made to work if you get it right but can kill a site pretty quickly
- ditch the gallery system your using ATM it looks very unprofessional looking
- ditch the created with mac stuff... in general people don't care how you made your site and if they do the mac-style burnished metal theme should be a dead giveaway (if you say how you created it why not go all the way, put the hosting system on too, why stop there -- what program did you use to write it, what physical machine, was it in the evening, were you eating a sandwitch, ect).
- loose the burnished metal theme, its THE theme everyone learns first in photoshop pick something original.
- pad down the top menu system its too close to the top of the page maybe add a nice (theme matching)header to the site the one you have now would look infinatly better above the top menu then below it.
- very linear feel to the homepage of the site (up to you i guess -- i dislike it)
- no written content, UGG. if I found this page on my own how would i know what i'm looking at? a nice little bit of text goes a long way...
Sorry to say, overall, that it looks like you found a gallery maker (on a mac i assume :-O ) and tried to use it as an entire site trying out every option along the way. |
