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			|  | 09/28/2004 04:49:57 AM · #1 | 
		| | I'm a relatively new member to DPchallenge and would like if you guyes would critique this image that I took today around sunset. 
 
   
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 -Mathyou
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			|  | 09/29/2004 02:23:41 AM · #2 | 
		| | Nice composition. Left cheek overexposed , work on lighting -  shadows on the face don't look good for me. | 
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			|  | 09/29/2004 02:32:45 AM · #3 | 
		| | Look at your background a bit more when placing the model.  Her gaze is the main subject (needs to open her eyes more, imo); but the leading lines of the fence draws all the attention to her mouth. 
 David
 
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