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09/11/2004 06:18:48 PM · #1 |
Did this one a while ago, but I was going to re-create it for Framing. Please critique. Don't worry about being harsh, would love honest opinions.
Thanks,
Ara
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09/11/2004 06:30:33 PM · #2 |
Nice job with the black and white. I think it is great.
But then again, I thought mine was good as well. Score didn't show it.
Place: 185 out of 305
Avg (all users): 4.915
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09/11/2004 06:33:49 PM · #3 |
I probably would have given it a 6. It certainly meets the challenge and carries a message. But esthetically it's not a great image although technically it's quite decent.
While we're at it, anyone want to take a stab at this one, with the Framing challenge in mind? I know it's a little soft even though I did USM before and after resizing. It was taken with the kit lens.

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09/11/2004 06:37:23 PM · #4 |
Originally posted by dartompkins: Nice job with the black and white. I think it is great.
But then again, I thought mine was good as well. Score didn't show it.
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Thanks. I like yours too. From reading some of the threads on the Framing challenge, I suspect your score reflects the fact that a lot of people didn't think foliage could be used to "frame" and voted pics like yours down because of it.
Message edited by author 2004-09-11 18:39:08.
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09/11/2004 06:38:47 PM · #5 |
Originally posted by orussell: I probably would have given it a 6. It certainly meets the challenge and carries a message. But esthetically it's not a great image although technically it's quite decent. |
Thanks for the comment! But, can you expand on why it isn't esthetically pleasing to you?
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09/11/2004 06:46:18 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by orussell: I probably would have given it a 6. It certainly meets the challenge and carries a message. But esthetically it's not a great image although technically it's quite decent.
While we're at it, anyone want to take a stab at this one, with the Framing challenge in mind? I know it's a little soft even though I did USM before and after resizing. It was taken with the kit lens.
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It probably would have been beat up since she is not entirely behind the frame and because she is a cute kiddo. I love the expression. Knowing how hard it is to capture kids that move like lightning, I can forgive the soft focus! |
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09/11/2004 09:35:34 PM · #7 |
Actually looks like it would have been nice for Backlighting.
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09/14/2004 08:59:44 AM · #8 |
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09/14/2004 09:15:08 AM · #9 |
Originally posted by BikeRacer: Did this one a while ago, but I was going to re-create it for Framing. Please critique. Don't worry about being harsh, would love honest opinions.
Thanks,
Ara |
I like the idea of the shot very much, and the black and white looks nice. What I don't find pleasing is the way the "frame" overwhelms the pic. I think those pillars or whatever they are, take up too much of the frame - especially with being dark and out of focus. The angle of the shot also makes it look tilted in my opinion. I hope this is helpful. |
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09/14/2004 09:17:34 AM · #10 |
I really like your image, Ara! The B&W conversion really adds to it and I love the detail you captured in the monument. Very cool! And very aesthetically pleasing! |
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09/14/2004 09:21:01 AM · #11 |
Originally posted by jpochard: Originally posted by BikeRacer: Did this one a while ago, but I was going to re-create it for Framing. Please critique. Don't worry about being harsh, would love honest opinions.
Thanks,
Ara |
I like the idea of the shot very much, and the black and white looks nice. What I don't find pleasing is the way the "frame" overwhelms the pic. I think those pillars or whatever they are, take up too much of the frame - especially with being dark and out of focus. The angle of the shot also makes it look tilted in my opinion. I hope this is helpful. |
Not to argue - you're opinion is just as valid!! But I like the weight of the frame in this image. It gives one the perspective of what a small child might see while standing in awe of the monument. |
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