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07/08/2004 10:30:57 PM · #1


Which one do you like best? Do you like either of them? Thanks for taking the time to comment and critique.

By the way, it looks much sharper when larger.
07/08/2004 10:51:33 PM · #2
Well...FWIW, I like the color version better than the B&W. As to the overall composition, there are a couple of good elements: The house itself is interesting and the big branches crossing over from the older trees are very nice. Detractors include the perfectly aligned young trees and the lamps that bob up and down with the lay of the land. Its like the park designers meant for those to be perfect, but they missed the mark. If the scene could be shot sans the foreground clutter (including that sign at the end of the path), then I think a model at the upper window or on the deck would be been a nice/intriguing touch. Also, that would lend itself more toward the B&W version, IMO. Of course, those changes would be impossible because you'll never get around those lamps. Too bad, too, 'cause the house and older trees have great potential.
07/08/2004 10:54:57 PM · #3
I would like the b/w one more if there were more contrast. Needs a bit of darken IMO.
07/09/2004 12:35:59 AM · #4
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback.
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