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10/07/2004 03:12:37 PM · #1 |
I am open to all opinions good and bad I am only interested in learning more so please leave an explanation. Thanks in advance.
Ty
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10/07/2004 03:26:33 PM · #2 |
Very phallic ;-)
I'm a border-basher so for me, I can't say good things while it has that border [or any for that matter].
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10/07/2004 03:40:38 PM · #3 |
The geometry/perspective makes the structure an interesting shape. It seems that the highlights are overexposed, though, and a good exposure could have shown some interesting lines and textures. Maybe a 1-stop difference.
One thing that I'm guilty of, but I don't know if you were, is failing to use a tripod. If you did use one, you were right. If you didn't, then that might explain why some of the details in the lowest 10-15% of the picture are a little fuzzy. On the other hand, it might just be a result of dropping the image size to 640 pixels. (Or it may be my monitor.)
The in-picture framing keeps the eye nicely on the subject. I don't have any feeling about the border - if you did it for a reason, that's OK - my rule for me is no gratuitous borders.
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10/07/2004 03:41:49 PM · #4 |
Do you prefer this?
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10/07/2004 03:43:18 PM · #5 |
Originally posted by ty_roni: I am open to all opinions good and bad I am only interested in learning more so please leave an explanation. Thanks in advance.
Ty
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it is pretty overexposed. you are losing detail on the monument. you might want to do a curve adjustment. this is just a quick one (i probably went too far the otherway) but you can see the diff.
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10/07/2004 03:45:15 PM · #6 |
Good tips. I did not use a tripod so that is probably why the bottom is soft. |
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10/07/2004 03:47:23 PM · #7 |
Wow, I see what you mean. This is great I am learning some good things here. Thanks again
Message edited by author 2004-10-07 15:48:19. |
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10/07/2004 03:53:28 PM · #8 |
Is this better.... |
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10/07/2004 04:16:31 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by ty_roni: Is this better.... |
Yep, much better! |
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10/07/2004 04:24:41 PM · #10 |
That last version is much, much better IMO |
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