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09/21/2004 02:25:41 AM · #1 |
Hello,
I have been here for a little while now and I have learned a lot from all of you. However... before I found you I took these photos of my cousin 
I do have a few more I think are ok also.
Any feedback would be great.
Please keep in mind This was my first time.:)
Message edited by author 2004-09-21 02:28:03. |
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09/21/2004 02:38:19 AM · #2 |
| I like the first one - nice composition but I would include whole arms or crop it to have just torso and the head, the second looks overexposed on my screen. |
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09/21/2004 02:41:18 AM · #3 |
Agree with artvet on the second looking overexposed.
Also I am not very fond of deep DOF in portrait-kind photos. a shallower DOF would work better IMO |
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09/21/2004 02:41:48 AM · #4 |
Art-
thank you for your comments, I am going to continue to work with them. |
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09/21/2004 02:56:22 AM · #5 |
| The distinct face draws attention, but I agree with gaurawa,it would be better with shallow DOF. |
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09/21/2004 03:02:34 AM · #6 |
Thank You for all of your comments,
this was basically just a test for his mother to see if I could do it. They didn't want to spend the money on your typical senior pictures. My cousin in the pictures didn't want any pictures taken. We pretty much forced him to do it, so he wasn't really into it anyways.
Thanks again for the comments.
Roni |
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