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08/02/2004 04:31:05 PM · #1 |
Every comment is highly appreciated...
       
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08/02/2004 05:12:06 PM · #2 |
Couple comments: on the first shot, I'm not sure what the plant in the foreground (that appears very black) is somewhat distracting. I would try shooting some different angles.
The second shot is nice, but a little more DOF and zooming in a bit so that the tree framing it is farther toward the edges of the photo would improve it.
The third shot looks a little bland as well as the fourth, fifth and seventh shot. The lighting is good in all of these, but I imagine you could shoot some different angles and maybe try to simplify the compositions a bit more.
The sixth shot is good, but I would be interested in seeing how it might look if you cropped it a bit tighter so that just the foreground and water is showing.
The last shot is good, but my eyes are drawn to the tree in the center and then to the houses in the background. If the focus is to be on the church, you might try zooming and walking to the left a bit.
Overall, pretty nice captures, just try to be a little more creative with your perspectives. |
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08/02/2004 05:19:31 PM · #3 |
My favorite out of the bunch is the seagull, the subject is framed well and in focus.
The second best is the monument, it is framed well, and the light is nice and the colors very good. The only problem with it is I don't have any connection with that particular monument, and it isn't too architecturally interesting, so the photo is a bit boring. But if you used this framing with another more interesting subject, it would be fine.
The others have some distracting trees that obscure the subject. Looks like you had a beautiful day to shoot!
Hope this helps,
Soleil |
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