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05/20/2004 10:42:20 AM · #1 |
How does this look??
is it too yellow??
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05/20/2004 10:52:10 AM · #2 |
| i like it - looks perfect, only - maybe needs a little sharpening. |
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05/20/2004 10:54:49 AM · #3 |
| I think it looks just right the way it is now. |
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05/20/2004 10:56:25 AM · #4 |
| looks tilted ... but very nice |
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05/20/2004 11:00:13 AM · #5 |
Why would you go sepia when you are trying to express springtime? Without any flowers or a colt or anything else associated with springtime, the brown grass in sepia says fall/autumn to me.
Besides that, I like it! |
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05/20/2004 11:02:19 AM · #6 |
I like it. The only thing I think I would change is add a little contrast but that is just a personal prefrence. I've always been a big fan of a little extra contrast.
Very good shot though. Two thumbs up... |
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05/20/2004 11:15:18 AM · #7 |
Originally posted by eostyles:
I like it. The only thing I think I would change is add a little contrast but that is just a personal prefrence. I've always been a big fan of a little extra contrast.
Very good shot though. Two thumbs up... |
I think I would add a little bit of contrast for a little more pop as well. Then again if this was in a dark frame it might just accomplish that same effect. |
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05/20/2004 11:16:43 AM · #8 |
| I don't think it's too yellow. I might darken it down to show off the ominous, "stormy" feel of the sky. Also, I think the line of the fence fights a little with the line of the mountains. But overall, this is a great shot. I'd give it an 8 in a free-study challenge. Nice work! |
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05/20/2004 02:31:25 PM · #9 |
I'd rather see the leaning relic of rune stone than a wire fence, but no matter how often I visit the portfolios of Icelandic DPCers, there are none!
I demand more uniquely Icelandic photos of Icelanders!
If none are produced within the following week, I'll ship there and take them myself! ;-)
Message edited by author 2004-05-20 14:33:10.
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05/20/2004 03:19:09 PM · #10 |
rune stones??
like big rocks with lots of writings from the wikings
well good luck in finding them
and...
let me know if you do
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05/20/2004 03:45:48 PM · #11 |
Originally posted by eostyles:
I like it. The only thing I think I would change is add a little contrast but that is just a personal prefrence. I've always been a big fan of a little extra contrast.
Very good shot though. Two thumbs up... |
Slighly more contrast would be nice. I'm in the higher contrast crowd. |
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05/20/2004 04:08:08 PM · #12 |
| I think it is very nice. However, the title does not fit the composition. Some of the posts already addressed this but I am not sure they hit it quite right. Your piece emits a more sorrowful and negative attitude. You use an image of barbed wire and empty fields and what looks like dry grass. These types of things might symbolize death or a harsh environment. You may want to try a title that relates to these things, or fall or winter maybe. Maybe something like, "after the spring." Just a thought. Like the others, I think a little more contrast may be nice as well. Beautiful work. |
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