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10/10/2008 02:20:29 PM · #1 |
What do you think? Feedback appreciated :) Just keep things positive and don't come down too hard on me ;)
Message edited by author 2008-10-10 14:21:07. |
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10/10/2008 03:45:27 PM · #2 |
I like the cold look of the WB and the smothness/white of the skin.
But what I really don't like is the complete dark jacket. If this is supposed to be a fashion shoot you shouldn't clip the shadows so much. I think this with a bit of fill light from LR would be great to enhance the details from the cloth.
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10/10/2008 03:53:55 PM · #3 |
I think if the clothing could be lightened up a bit to show more detail, you're there. Otherwise, I really like your bluish tones, background choice and overall composition. As an option, I also would love to see closer, tighter cropped images from the same shoot ...
All-in-all very nice work. |
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10/10/2008 04:54:03 PM · #4 |
Thanks for the early feedback, I double checked the edits on a couple of different monitors and agreed the shadows got clipped a bit too much... it did need more detail in the clothing! Thanks for helping me with that, I got a little carried away with the dark moody feel!
Here are some fixes! Open to more suggestions as well!
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10/10/2008 05:55:47 PM · #5 |
Yum :-)
Ok, that wasn't too helpful, but they (and the model) look great to me!! |
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10/10/2008 06:31:17 PM · #6 |
Bring garlic and holy water to the shoot in case he gets a little uppity.
Good looking pics! |
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10/10/2008 07:41:59 PM · #7 |
Originally posted by ladyhawk22:
Yum :-)
Ok, that wasn't too helpful, but they (and the model) look great to me!! |
:) |
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10/10/2008 09:52:36 PM · #8 |
I love them. seriously.
They are gorgeous.
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10/10/2008 10:06:31 PM · #9 |
Originally posted by magenmarie:
I love them. seriously.
They are gorgeous. |
Thank you :) |
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