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10/10/2008 12:43:37 PM · #1 |
...give me a few hints, tips, suggestions...
I entered the following in the colour studio portrait challenge. I'm not here to complain about the score as I'm thrilled that my first attempt at really shooting in a studio environment didn't get completely hammered by the voters...
What I'd really like would be some constructive feedback from anyone who knows more about this field than I (most everyone...)
So if you have a moment...
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10/10/2008 12:55:28 PM · #2 |
Looking at the front page for this challenge most all were tight cropped head shots. Even though I like the model with her eyes closed, I think you might had been hit for that too. Over all very nice shot!
Message edited by author 2008-10-10 15:12:30.
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10/10/2008 02:38:28 PM · #3 |
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10/10/2008 03:15:53 PM · #4 |
First off it is a good shot, really fun aspect to it... and I see where you were going with it.
I think the background got a little too blown out making the hair look a little damaged, and her skin and the picture overall appears a little too smooth and soft for my taste. I think a slightly different perspective, perhaps slightly angled a bit more down towards the model might have helped-with less empty space above her head. |
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