I tried a similar type of shot with my son a while ago, and i also missed the mark.
The lighting was disapointing, and I also had to desat just to get rid of horrible colours. PP helped a little, but I was still disappointed. In the end, I decided the lighting was too flat.
If I reshot, I would...
1) Get a true black background. Having to remove a not-quite-black background reduces the dynamic range in the whole photo.
2) Get a nicer soft but directional light. A window is OK, but make sure it's bright enough to expose the shot properly, and make sure there is no other light in the room, no other windows. Even partially close the curtains halfway or more and go closer to the window, so there is a small bright source of soft light. If you can do this really well, you may even want to introduce a reflector to fill the shadows, and give you 2 light sources to work with.
3) I'd say put the light a little more front on for this pose, so that the back foot is not lost in the shadow.
4) Work on posing. If you've seen shots you really like, study them, and try to copy the pose. It's just hands and feet, but I feel yours is a jumble of digits, whereas the shots you really like probably have artistically arranged the subject into a nice composition.
Well, just a few ideas. Maybe you can find time without the other kids around to get this shot again? It certainly has good promise.
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