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11/13/2007 08:39:08 AM · #1
Id love some feedback on the following photos, they were taken later in the arvo as thats when it was organized, I found that my experience in Landscape didn't help a bit, and the whole thing moved quite a bit faster then landscapes do to. I had a great time, but did feel a bit rushed.

C&C most welcome
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11/13/2007 03:33:25 PM · #2
bump
11/13/2007 08:50:05 PM · #3
Final Bump, are they really that pedestrian?
11/13/2007 09:00:40 PM · #4
4,5,9 are my favorites.
For 4... looks great... probably the best shot in my opinion. For 5 the only thing I would suggest is try to not cut off her feet. For 9 maybe just a slight fill on the dark side of her face so we can see both eyes, but again... thats just my opinion.

The shots with the male model seems to lack much emotion which in turn makes the shots kinda dull. I like the perspective/angle on 7 but again the model has sort of a blank stare on her face... wish she'd have some type of emotion showing through.
11/13/2007 09:09:05 PM · #5
I know this will sound stoopid, but what is "TFP"?

R.
11/13/2007 09:09:54 PM · #6
Trade for Print/Pics
11/13/2007 09:18:13 PM · #7
I glad someone clarified what TFP meant, was feeling slightly ignorant myself.
11/13/2007 09:53:58 PM · #8
Gotcha.

R.
11/13/2007 10:40:47 PM · #9
Thanks xcharrier & loseme

I was surprised at how hard it was to drag a smile out of the models, the poses were hard as well, but as I wasn't the only tog we all just did what we could. loseme the sunset colour with the male was actually my reflector, it turned out a bit too gold for my likeing and I had to desaturate it a bit to tone it down. There is a gold/silver half and half option with my reflector so I'll try that next time.

Thanks again
11/13/2007 10:50:21 PM · #10
I left some comments, hopefully they are helpful!
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