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11/12/2007 11:39:36 PM · #1 |
this design is the un completed web design project for school i didnt choose the type of webstie it had to be (trust me native plants arent my thing)
what do you think... keep in mind im doing this to the level of the average student...im not going to spend 12 hours on something im not getting paid for this is basically top of the class work for web design.
Message edited by author 2007-11-12 23:40:28. |
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11/12/2007 11:43:37 PM · #2 |
pretty nice, lots of spelling errors though. you might want to link to the image from here, its kinda big.
Message edited by author 2007-11-12 23:59:34. |
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11/12/2007 11:52:58 PM · #3 |
| I think the fonts are a little too big and bold. It looks like "Impact" and that's not a good text font... okay for headlines, but hard to read in body copy and it shouts at you when overused. :) The colors don't really say "nature." I mean, the green's on the right track, but the grey, to me, says technology or something, so it's a little mismatched. The layout's cool... different and definitely not cookie-cutter at all, which is great. You're definitely on the right track. |
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11/13/2007 02:56:54 AM · #4 |
| thanks...and as for spelling it really doesnt matter... thats mostly filler that wont be read |
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11/13/2007 03:21:25 AM · #5 |
| I'd second the call for a slight change in colour and font. The combination of the two at present makes the page look like it is selling things related to a certain dodgy 'weed'. Also, I keep reading 'Great "Reeds" Shop' as 'Great "Seeds" Shop', which probably isn't the effect you are going for. |
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11/13/2007 05:55:23 AM · #6 |
Originally posted by Jib:
thanks...and as for spelling it really doesnt matter... thats mostly filler that wont be read |
Regardless of it being 'filler', I think you should spellcheck it. Bad spelling like that indicates carelessness. And if you're careless with spelling what about the things I'm not seeing, like the HTML code? |
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11/13/2007 06:47:03 AM · #7 |
You don't need lines before the links for example you have
|Link|Link|Link|Link|Link|
What it should look like is,
Link | Link | Link | Link | Link,
Also make sure that you spell check your filler. You say it won't be read but all of us read it.
The links on the bottom should be up more and not half way on the green and half on gray.
On the bottom one, the following are too big and the stroke is too big as well.
"Great "Reeds" Shop","Moreâ, and the description lettering under the books. If you are going for a professional look you are far from it. Personally if I was looking for plant things I wouldn't stay on this site.
Now that's not a bad thing to hear, this should drive you to fix it and make it better. And the just an FYI if this is a school project you should not just build a site fast just to turn it in. Strive to exceed on this project. Let me ask you this, would you take a real fast picture JUST to enter it into a challenge, or would you think about it, plan it out, shoot it over and over again to try and get that perfect shot?
Message edited by author 2007-11-13 06:47:22.
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11/13/2007 11:19:49 AM · #8 |
Originally posted by Lowcivicman99:
You don't need lines before the links for example you have
|Link|Link|Link|Link|Link|
What it should look like is,
Link | Link | Link | Link | Link,
Also make sure that you spell check your filler. You say it won't be read but all of us read it.
The links on the bottom should be up more and not half way on the green and half on gray.
On the bottom one, the following are too big and the stroke is too big as well.
"Great "Reeds" Shop","Moreâ, and the description lettering under the books. If you are going for a professional look you are far from it. Personally if I was looking for plant things I wouldn't stay on this site.
Now that's not a bad thing to hear, this should drive you to fix it and make it better. And the just an FYI if this is a school project you should not just build a site fast just to turn it in. Strive to exceed on this project. Let me ask you this, would you take a real fast picture JUST to enter it into a challenge, or would you think about it, plan it out, shoot it over and over again to try and get that perfect shot? |
you sir...win |
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