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10/20/2007 01:52:59 AM · #1
I am thinking about selling this photo at local events. Could you guys please offer your honest opinion on the image, and what improvements might make it better? I have a 24x36 and I have had quite a few good comments from family and friends. Is the green cast too much? Feel free to tell me if you don't care for it or what you don't like about it. Thanks

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10/20/2007 01:55:29 AM · #2
Very fascinating! Wow and How?
10/20/2007 02:03:07 AM · #3
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Message edited by author 2007-10-26 11:41:14.
10/20/2007 02:37:39 AM · #4
Not my taste, but I can imagine it might sell. I think you have to makes sure that you clone out any recognizable trade mark, but I am not sure. And you might want to try to bring a little detail back in the blown out skies (especially the lower part)
10/20/2007 05:24:07 AM · #5
Here are a couple of mor edits what do ya think? [thumb]602384[/thumb] [thumb]602382[/thumb]
10/20/2007 11:18:55 AM · #6
Bump.
10/20/2007 11:43:51 AM · #7
Interesting as a series, well executed in my opinion, and certain to appeal to people who like this kind of imagery. Personally there's nothing I could say to make it better, since I don't know what your intention is with making this image. I'd think it's the best it can be when you've decided so. If I were making it, the more important question would be whether or not I liked it, was satisfied, whether it fulfilled some kind of expectation of mine or need I had, etc. You know, all that artsy-fartsy crap. ;-)
10/20/2007 12:59:34 PM · #8
Nice, a shot that requires a bit of thinking.

Personally I like the tones in the first shot you posted. The Greenish tint eases the chaos of the shot... (this is a good thing for me).

Keeping in mind that I am a Left Handed Virgo...(analytical and everything has be in order) my only druther on the original shot would be to have the background a little straighter (vertically).

The foreground is square but the background has a slight lean to the right. Perhaps it is just that the upper left corner really stands out and a crop of that distracting area would make it not so evident.

Just my thoughts... but this is a nice artistic piece.

Message edited by author 2007-10-20 12:59:46.
10/20/2007 01:00:49 PM · #9
I think this would be nice in a framed series. I know some individuals who would love this kind of imagery in their offices.

You did a great job!
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