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07/28/2007 03:12:29 PM · #1			 | 
		
		I took a series photos of my friend (in red) training at the local pool. I am post-processing about 10 for her to have but I am not satisfied with what I have done so far but I don't really know what it's missing. Some pointers would be great. - Thanks
 
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07/28/2007 03:24:34 PM · #2			 | 
		
		Here's my take on it.  It's not an easy edit for sure.  
 
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07/28/2007 03:28:23 PM · #3			 | 
		
		I don't consider myself an expert at photo processing by any means, but here's what I came up with.  I added a channel mixer, selective color and curves adjustment layers.  And a light unsharp mask.
 
  
 
 Here's the PSD file with layers so you can see what I did:
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07/28/2007 03:39:30 PM · #4			 | 
		
		This is great....
 
 So in general it sounds like, I need to: 
 get rid of the greenish color in the water
 keep the saturation in blues of the lane markers down
 highlight the skin tones more
 
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07/28/2007 03:44:39 PM · #5			 | 
		
		I think the main thing to do to give this image "impact" is to crop in tight.  Something like this:
 
  
 
 I did modify the colors just a bit with hue/sat and then lightened with curves.  A bit of USM at 11 / 60 / 0 helped make the swimmers pop.
 
 Note that I did up-size the image because I cropped in so tight.  It would have looked better (less grainy) had I not had to up-size it.
 
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07/28/2007 03:58:33 PM · #6			 | 
		
		Originally posted by wronp:   This is great....
 
 So in general it sounds like, I need to: 
 get rid of the greenish color in the water
 keep the saturation in blues of the lane markers down
 highlight the skin tones more  |   
 
 I personally preferred the bluer tones in the water instead of the green, but I'm not sure what you were after exactly.  So I went with what looked good to me. :)   As I looked at it some more, I took some red out of the skin and it looked even better, too. |  
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07/28/2007 04:08:13 PM · #7			 | 
		
		 
 
 Cropped and used a post processing work flow shared by   benjikan.  I use PSP X so the terminology might be slightly different in Photoshop but you should be able to figure it out.
 
 1) USM @ Radius 50, Strength 15, Clipping 3
 2) Duplicate layer
 3) USM Duplicate @ Radius 0.3, Strength 300, Clipping 3
 4) Set Duplicate layer to Soft Light
 5) Desaturate duplicate layer (This is optional and is dependent upon the image)
 6) Set Duplicate layer Opacity to 50-60% or taste
 7) Merge all layers
 8) USM @ Radius 1.0, Strength 100, Clipping 3 (This is my standard USM after down sizing for the web. |  
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07/28/2007 09:58:34 PM · #8			 | 
		
		Thanks everyone for the great guidance. I really appreciate all of your input. I now have something I am much happier with. Now I am trying to make it consistent across all of the photos. 
 
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07/28/2007 11:30:14 PM · #9			 | 
		
		| I might get lynched for saying this on DPC but... why do you need to post process a photo like that? If the colors look like they did in real life, why screw that up? |  
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07/28/2007 11:53:13 PM · #10			 | 
		
		Sometimes, besides the colors / sharpness, contrast, brightness etc adjustments, a creative crop can change the whole look & feel of an image.
 
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 (open each in a new window and shift between them in the task bar to see changes easily)
 
 Opened, rotated CW, adjusted white balance, did a hue/saturation & lighten adjustment of the greens, added a warming filter, shifted the hue on the red saturation to pop the yellows in the skin a bit more, ran a strong USM sharpening action, cropped and saved.
  Message edited by author 2007-07-28 23:54:22.
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07/29/2007 12:00:52 AM · #11			 | 
		
		 
 Adjust layer Hue/Sat (to run away from that green sick look in water)
 - Desaturate green
 - Desaturate cyan
 Adjust layer color Balance (to give a cyan/blue clean color to the water
 - Use mask to protect the swimmers from this tone
 Merge
 Some dodge in the splashes for a more dynamic image
 Unsharp mask 150, 0.3 fade to Dark
 
 I feel the image is pushed too much for the blue... But u got the steps here and you just need to go until u happy ;)
 
  
 - less cyan/blue tone and some dodge and burn around
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07/29/2007 12:20:40 AM · #12			 | 
		
		 
 here's my shot at this ron! although i love those green waters while i am swimming in them, i think the tones are off-putting to the viewer. i would write my steps, but i think   de sousa's are better! |  
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07/29/2007 10:59:22 AM · #13			 | 
		
		Here's my try!!  :)
 
  
 
 Option 2:
  
  Message edited by author 2007-07-29 11:03:18. |  
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