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05/10/2007 10:28:19 AM · #1 |
Thanks in advance,
asked my girl to pose for me, did some searching in her closest for the dress & top. Make-up is inspired by another photographer (name I don't know).
Intention was to make her face have this sereen look.
  
Greetings
moi..
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05/11/2007 06:27:01 AM · #2 |
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05/11/2007 06:45:55 AM · #3 |
Your model holds an excellent pose and she has an interesting and arresting face. If you were somehow working on a circus theme I would feel you were getting there, however you mention you were hoping for a serene look. You've just about captured that, especially in image 2, but the make up does nothing to enhance it. The composition, lighting and processing in 1 and 2 is good, I'm less happy with image 3.
Looking good. ;) |
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05/11/2007 09:05:08 AM · #4 |
I like them. They make one wonder what the story behind them is. I like the second one best and I think the dyptych would be better with the left hand image horizontally flipped.
I also agree that you lost the lighting values a bit in the diptych.
All in all, refreshingly different IMO.
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