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11/11/2002 05:58:59 PM · #1
ive been working on variants of

this shot

for a few days now ..

im curious what people think or if they have any suggestions.

also feel free to look in that folder and see if any of the other takes work better for you, and why : )

:) thanks in advance
Kollin



* This message has been edited by the author on 11/11/2002 6:54:10 PM.
11/11/2002 06:00:25 PM · #2
Love it. Very nice. Did you try turning the leaf on the right to an upward position? Be interesting to see what the difference is.
11/11/2002 06:03:06 PM · #3
Transitions II is my favorite out of the series. Very nice. :-)
11/11/2002 06:04:40 PM · #4
nice contrast mag... how about trying to dry the leaves off? the wetspots seem, ummm strange? droplets might be better if ya want water on them... then again maybe not.. have to try and see :o)
11/11/2002 06:58:46 PM · #5
heya

i just rematted
this one.

it's a dry leaf with needles instead.

yay? nay?


11/11/2002 07:00:00 PM · #6
Yay. definitely Yay.
Very strong straight lines and shapes. Very nice
11/11/2002 07:03:17 PM · #7
I like the transitional 2 the best. I really like the deep colors in the upper left. I like them all, but the light in transitional 3 is to bright. Tone it down and it should be perfect.
11/11/2002 07:03:47 PM · #8
theres a wow factor in that last one... perfect 10 and really nice! good work
11/11/2002 09:31:43 PM · #9
I find the background too distracting. Try a soft blur on the background leaves.


* This message has been edited by the author on 11/11/2002 9:30:00 PM.
11/11/2002 09:48:22 PM · #10
Originally posted by magnetic9999:
heya

i just rematted
this one.

it's a dry leaf with needles instead.

yay? nay?

Yahoo! love it. Not too bright on my monitor. JUst glows. *grin*




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