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04/10/2007 02:23:01 PM · #1
Bits and pieces of a train parked near my house.









Kindness is appreciated - but so is brutality. ;)

Also - is it possible for me to post TN links in the forums for images hosted elsewhere?
04/12/2007 12:57:37 PM · #2
Nothin'? Surely there's something to criticize.

Or else they're perfect, in which case I'd like to sell you all some prints...
04/12/2007 01:04:41 PM · #3
I like em.. i did some train pictures with a senior photo shoot last year, and the girl really liked em.. but anyway, i like yours, they have a nice balance between the colors and dark, and the train parts and scenery :) good job

if anything, i don't like the third one, not sure why. so there ya go :)

Message edited by author 2007-04-12 13:05:19.
04/12/2007 01:05:41 PM · #4
I really like the top one. The colors and lighting are great.
04/12/2007 01:24:30 PM · #5
I really like the top one, too.
it's very straightforward if it makes any sence,
it almost said: booom! when I look at it for the first time.
I like that "booboom!" feeling from photos :)

the second one is cool, too. great angle, really. and that booboom! feeling, too.

great colors on all of them!
04/12/2007 01:39:30 PM · #6
Thanks all!

Krystle, I agree with you on the third one - I think the yellow doesn't pop enough. I haven't tried seperating it out and diddling the color yet, but I'm not sure it would help.

Here's the original of the first:



Hurrah for Gimp!

Anyway, I'm just learning, so praise is nice and criticism even better. Thanks for the input. I'm amazed, and intimidated, and inspired by the quality of work on this site.

Now off to the countryside to shoot some snowy landscapes!

Message edited by author 2007-04-12 13:40:02.
04/12/2007 01:44:15 PM · #7
Originally posted by eamurdock:

Also - is it possible for me to post TN links in the forums for images hosted elsewhere?


Yes. I explained one method in this thread Posting Thumb Nails to Out Side Web Sites
04/13/2007 12:00:35 AM · #8
i actually quite like the one with the writing, i'm not sure why.
But i'm wondering if it would have been better had it been zoomed out a bit more to see more of the surroundings as i can't really tell what it is.... but then again that isn't always necessarily a bad thing....
04/13/2007 12:19:27 AM · #9
these are excellent!!! i'm inspired... i lived next to a train station last year, and still work right next to it. there are always rail cars going by, or just parked there, and i keep kicking myself for not going and getting shots like this. i really like them... good job! also, thanks for showing us the unedited version of the first one. what steps did you take in gimp to get the final product? it's very well done...
04/13/2007 03:01:08 PM · #10
Editing was saturation and contrast, then an additional layer, blurred and darkened, applied with a gradient mask to create the vignetting.

I'm just learning what my style is... It's an interesting process. Turns out I like a lot of contrast.
04/13/2007 04:20:23 PM · #11
I don't have time to do so now and if I remember later I will do a critique or two for you.

I'd suggest that your discussion title is affecting the quality of the responses you are getting. It implies that all you want is for people to tell you what is wrong with your images. I think what you really want is a critique.

A good critique covers both sides of the issue, both what is 'wrong' and what is 'right' about an image. Often, you learn far more knowing what is 'right' about your image balanced against what is 'wrong' with it then you do just having it 'trashed'.

Further, you want to remember that a critique represents only one person's opinion, both good and bad. It does not neccessarily represent the view of the group. The good photographer will be able to separate the wheat from the chaff. That is the key to improving your photography.
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