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02/23/2007 03:34:02 AM · #1 |
//jonbuder.com/images/card3.jpg
Any suggestions greatly appreciated. I'm going to be donating some prints to a local weirdo gatheri.. I mean UFO conference, and if I can make some business cards up to put them with the pictures, maybe I'll get some clients or more people to buy prints. I might be able to print them at work for free, but I'm not sure. At least some samples probably, and hopefully I can do that tomorrow, but I can change the design again before then.
Yeah, I totally jacked the idea from the High Voltage album cover. I love that one.
Message edited by L2 - Changed large image to link. |
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02/23/2007 03:59:45 AM · #2 |
IMHO:
The big lighting bolt is just a little to crazy.
The colors don't match anything else in the image.
My eye keeps staring at that, rather than your name and contact info.
Develop the color scheme a little more.
The orange works, maybe a little green to go with the stroke on the text.
Also, why lighting bolts?
What does that have to do with photography?
I guess it would make sense if these cards are a one time thing for the conference.
One last thing, I'd say move the main element down a little, there's not enough room above "photography"
Hope I am of some assistance. |
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02/23/2007 04:21:59 AM · #3 |
Keep the big lightning, but make it a single color. kick out anything else and straighten the letters. don't use outlines, glows, bevels. I'll be back in ten minutes with my approach...
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02/23/2007 04:34:37 AM · #4 |
here you are.
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02/23/2007 05:43:43 AM · #5 |
Originally posted by eyewave:
here you are. |
that is so much better!! maybe I would've made an outline at the lightning though.
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02/23/2007 05:58:22 AM · #6 |
I kinda liked the swipes behind the website url and email addy though ...
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02/23/2007 07:03:42 AM · #7 |
Originally posted by Greetmir:
I kinda liked the swipes behind the website url and email addy though ... |
you must be stuck in the 80s :-P
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02/23/2007 07:15:35 AM · #8 |
| Think it looks terrible to be honest, far too garish. |
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02/23/2007 07:18:07 AM · #9 |
| It's good for a sci-fi clientele, but I wouldn't use this as a general business card. |
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02/23/2007 01:07:57 PM · #10 |
Thanks for the suggestions. Eyewave, that one does look more like a regular business card, and maybe that's a good thing.
I'll work on a variation.
This was what inspired the design, by the way:
//www.amazon.com/High-Voltage-AC-DC/dp/B00008BXJ6 |
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02/23/2007 03:57:38 PM · #11 |
Here's another version.. I guess the lightning bolt can go, but I kind of like it.
//jonbuder.com/images/card4.jpg |
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