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12/21/2006 07:57:49 PM · #1 |
To get you to take a gander at my new portrait.... :oP

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12/21/2006 08:41:28 PM · #2 |
Light areas feel blown out, image feels soft, highlights on lips seem excessive, overall color cast is a sickly yellow. But otherwise the pose and the lighting are very nice :-)
R.
Very quick reworking: 
Message edited by author 2006-12-21 20:53:50.
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12/21/2006 08:56:30 PM · #3 |
Wow she just went from natural to bottle red-head and appears to have gotten a black eye in the process! heheh |
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12/21/2006 09:15:31 PM · #4 |
Originally posted by routerguy666: Wow she just went from natural to bottle red-head and appears to have gotten a black eye in the process! heheh |
I said it was quick didn't I? jejejeâ¢
R.
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12/21/2006 09:25:38 PM · #5 |
I gave it a try, hope you didn't mind.
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12/21/2006 09:30:02 PM · #6 |
I like the high key of the first one... |
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12/21/2006 09:49:39 PM · #7 |
I also did a quickie on it, but had trouble doing anything at all on it, as I just wanted to sit and stare...
Oh wait - I did do a little, and hope you don't mind.
I think her skin was just a touch too light and dropped the levels in the midtones a bit globally and history brushed back in her hair, eyes and under & over the eyes, and mouth. I did a touch of sharpening on her hair and raised the brightness & contrast just a touch on her Irises, as well as softened the texture in a couple areas on her skin.
------------ Original ---------------- Edited -----------
Click on each and switch between them in the taskbar to see before & after.
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12/21/2006 09:56:43 PM · #8 |
I like what you did with it Brad.... thanks for the instruction :o)
Now I must go and try to reproduce it... :oP
Message edited by author 2006-12-21 22:00:03.
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12/21/2006 10:03:48 PM · #9 |
Ok, how do you drop the levels in the midtones?
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12/21/2006 10:09:22 PM · #10 |
Image, Adjustments, Levels, grabbed the middle slider under the histogram and shifted just slightly to the right.
Think I dropped it to around 0.88 to 0.84 or somewhere in between them and
then used a soft brush with teh history tool to restore the areas inside the red sections:
The eyes was a new layer via copy, Elliptical Marquis tool to draw a circle around one Iris, hold Shift key and draw around the second one. Raised the brightness about 20% & contrast about 10%, deselected, then used the eraser tool to erase everything outside of the Iris & flattened. Manual sharpnesss tool at about 20% strength, and did the eyes and hair.
Message edited by author 2006-12-21 22:25:07.
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12/21/2006 10:11:35 PM · #11 |
Here's my take :)
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12/21/2006 10:33:53 PM · #12 |
Ok... I think I got pretty close to your edit, Brad.... Thanks again for the help!
Although, I think I still need to adjust the contrast on the eyes more....
Message edited by author 2006-12-21 22:35:53.
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12/21/2006 10:36:09 PM · #13 |
Anytime. Looks a lot better than the original did imo.
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