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06/01/2006 01:01:44 PM · #1 |
I've begun doing some work as both a writer and photographer for a local magazine. I thought I'd share my first article, which came out today:
The Point North |
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06/01/2006 01:08:21 PM · #2 |
What a wonderful and touching story! Very reassuring for people, like myself, who have waited to have children for the very same reasons.
It looks like you have a promising career as a writer. Congratulations! |
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06/01/2006 01:09:00 PM · #3 |
Very well writen. I too had those questions about myself and being a father. I now have three sons rangeing in ages from 12 to three months. It has been the most rewarding thing I have ever or will ever do. They are my life and joy. Thank you for shareing you story, very touching.
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06/01/2006 01:12:11 PM · #4 |
Nice and touching. There is an odd flow from the pre-child to post-child writing. It seems to just jump into the "we now have a kid" phase. A gradual transition, with perhaps a joke/quip about *how* you became parents, might work well. As a whole, it might be best to have a "message" rather than a "story," per se. In other words, where the article currently appeals to the person who might want to know more about you, it doesn't tell the reader a lot about themselves.
But, again, its a touching and sincere piece. |
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06/01/2006 01:37:18 PM · #5 |
You're right, and points well taken. In my defense, the original article was much longer, but had to be pared back to 500 words. I definitely struggled with trying to trim it down to the appropriate length while keeping continuity intact. It's a start, though :)
Originally posted by bledford:
Nice and touching. There is an odd flow from the pre-child to post-child writing. It seems to just jump into the "we now have a kid" phase. A gradual transition, with perhaps a joke/quip about *how* you became parents, might work well. As a whole, it might be best to have a "message" rather than a "story," per se. In other words, where the article currently appeals to the person who might want to know more about you, it doesn't tell the reader a lot about themselves.
But, again, its a touching and sincere piece. |
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06/01/2006 02:12:12 PM · #6 |
Originally posted by alanfreed:
I am completely incapable of throwing away a single piece of artwork she has crafted for me, nearly requiring us to rent an artwork storage facility unit. |
They don't warn you about this part in the parenting classes! Nice work : ) |
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06/01/2006 05:31:13 PM · #7 |
| Great article! Did anyone say "you must have a really nice pen?" ;-) |
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