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05/27/2006 02:40:30 AM · #1 |
I am not sure if it is me working to hard and seeing things screwy or if it is the models monitor. But I would love some comments on this image.
And don't pull any punches. I am thick skinned and can take a hell of a hit.
edited to add yes I relize there is some pixelation going on. Just seeing if the tonal range and whatnot is looking good to most people
Message edited by author 2006-05-27 02:42:22.
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05/27/2006 02:51:10 AM · #2 |
Ok I know it said comments but I couldnt resist heres my version ^_^
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05/27/2006 02:53:29 AM · #3 |
I think I would personally prefer somewhere between the 2 posted images. The original looks too red to me, however, scarlet's version looks too pale. I love the shot though, great shapes. |
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05/27/2006 03:02:00 AM · #4 |
Originally posted by xXxscarletxXx: Ok I know it said comments but I couldnt resist heres my version ^_^
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Thats quite alright examples are fine and dandy by me
HBunch I agree it seems abit red to me as well maybe, I have messed with abit too much.
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05/27/2006 03:43:03 AM · #5 |
Wonderful pose/composition! Would like to see colour between the 2, but also wonder how it would look b/w?
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05/27/2006 03:45:56 AM · #6 |
to the top left above her shoulder, there is some light "smears?" maybe from background, I would blacken those out. Seems great otherwise, the pic is big, so I can't see the entire thing at once on my screen, but the only other thing I noticed, not saying good or bad, is that the focus is only on her nails for the most part... just something to think about. Awesome pic and lovely photo, would get at least an 8 or 9 from me (depending on the challenge that is, lol) |
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05/27/2006 03:45:08 PM · #7 |
bump for some more comments
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05/27/2006 03:59:57 PM · #8 |
Yeah, I'd like to see the nails a bit darker, and the foot in the background a little lighter, maybe. |
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05/27/2006 04:03:00 PM · #9 |
i would like to see some more highlights to contrast the shadows. great composition. i like it |
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05/27/2006 04:15:46 PM · #10 |
The angles created by her left shoulder - right if you are the viewer - appear too harsh. It almost looks like an unnatural bend. I would have prefered a shallow depth of field to minize this effect or possible a different pose where she was not flexing her muscles quite as much and appeared to be under strain. |
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